Day 5 ATI TEAS Formal vs. Informal Language
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Term |
Definition |
TEAS Context |
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Formal language |
Standard English used in academic
writing, professional documents, medical records, business correspondence,
and official reports. Avoids contractions, slang, colloquialisms, and
first-person pronouns (I, we, you) unless necessary. |
✅ Required for essays, research papers,
nursing care plans, patient handouts, business memos, and professional
emails. |
|
Informal language |
Casual English used in everyday
conversation, personal texts, social media, and diary entries. May include
contractions, slang, sentence fragments, and first-person pronouns freely. |
❌ Not acceptable in academic or professional
writing on the TEAS. |
TEAS Rule of Thumb:
If a sentence appears in a formal context (essay, report, medical
documentation, letter to a professional), it must use formal language. Informal
language will be marked as incorrect.
Key
Differences: Formal vs. Informal
|
Feature |
Formal |
Informal |
|
Contractions |
Cannot (not can't) |
Can't |
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Pronouns |
One, a person, the patient |
You, I, we |
|
Vocabulary |
Precise, sophisticated |
Simple, vague |
|
Slang |
Never |
Often (cool, sucks, kinda) |
|
Sentence structure |
Complete, complex |
Fragments, run-ons allowed |
|
Phrasal verbs |
Avoid (investigate vs. check out) |
Common (check out, figure out) |
|
Transition words |
However, therefore, consequently |
But, so, anyway |
Formal
vs. Informal Examples (TEAS-relevant)
|
Informal |
Formal |
|
The patient was kinda tired. |
The patient reported fatigue. |
|
We think the results are weird. |
The results appear unusual. |
|
You should take this med with food. |
The patient should take this
medication with a meal. |
|
The experiment didn't work. |
The experiment did not produce the
expected results. |
|
Let's figure out what went wrong. |
Determine the cause of the
discrepancy. |
|
The nurse was super nice. |
The nurse demonstrated a
professional and compassionate demeanor. |
|
A lot of patients missed
appointments. |
Numerous patients missed
appointments. |
|
The doctor gave the okay. |
The physician approved the treatment
plan. |
How
the TEAS Tests Formal vs. Informal Language
The TEAS will present a sentence
in a specific context (e.g., a research paper, a nursing note, an email to a
supervisor, a patient handout) and ask you to:
- Identify whether the language is formal or informal.
- Choose the best revision to make informal language formal.
- Recognize which sentence is appropriate for a given
professional setting.
✍ Practice Questions: Formal vs. Informal
for ATI TEAS
Questions 1–5: Identifying Formal vs. Informal
Question 1
Which of the following sentences
is written in formal language suitable for a research paper?
A) The results were pretty
surprising, honestly.
B) We kinda think the data is off.
C) The findings deviate significantly from the original hypothesis.
D) It looks like something went wrong with the experiment.
Answer: C – Uses precise vocabulary (“deviate significantly,”
“original hypothesis”) with no slang or informality.
Question 2
A nurse writes in a patient chart:
“The patient seems kinda confused about the discharge instructions.”
Which word makes this sentence
informal and inappropriate for medical documentation?
A) seems
B) confused
C) discharge
D) kinda
Answer: D – “Kinda” (kind of) is informal. The sentence should
read “seems somewhat confused” or “appears confused.”
Question 3
Which sentence would be
inappropriate for a formal business memo?
A) All staff must complete the
training by Friday.
B) Please submit your timesheets to payroll by noon.
C) We need to get this done ASAP, so don't slack off.
D) The quarterly meeting has been rescheduled to March 5th.
Answer: C – “ASAP,” “don’t,” and “slack off” are all informal for
a business memo. Formal: “This must be completed promptly.”
Question 4
Read the sentence from a patient
education handout:
“You should call your doctor if you feel worse.”
Which of the following best
evaluates the formality of this sentence?
A) Too formal — patients prefer
casual language
B) Appropriate — patient education often uses “you” for clarity
C) Inappropriate — should use passive voice only
D) Slang — should be removed
Answer: B – Patient education materials often use second-person
(“you”) for direct, clear instructions. This is acceptable and not considered
informal in that specific context.
TEAS Tip:
Context matters! “You” is fine for patient handouts but not for research
papers.
Question 5
Which of the following is a
feature of informal language?
A) Complete sentences
B) Precise vocabulary
C) Contractions (e.g., don't, can't, won't)
D) Third-person pronouns
Answer: C – Contractions are a hallmark of informal language.
Formal writing spells them out (do not, cannot, will not).
Questions 6–10: Revising Informal to Formal
Question 6
Revise the following sentence for
a formal nursing report:
“The patient didn't want to get out of bed.”
Which revision is most
appropriate?
A) The patient refused to get out
of bed.
B) The patient didn't want to get out of bed at all.
C) The patient kinda didn't want to get up.
D) The patient was like, no way, to getting up.
Answer: A – “Refused” is precise, professional, and eliminates the
contraction “didn’t.”
Question 7
A student writes in an academic
essay: “A lot of studies show that sleep affects memory.”
Which replacement is most formal?
A) Lots of
B) Numerous
C) A bunch of
D) Plenty of
Answer: B – “Numerous” is formal. “A lot of,” “lots of,” “a bunch
of,” and “plenty of” are all informal.
Question 8
Read the sentence from a research
proposal:
“We think this treatment might work better than the old one.”
Which revision is most formal?
A) We believe this treatment may
be more effective than the previous one.
B) This treatment is probably better than the old one.
C) Researchers hypothesize this treatment may be more effective than the
previous one.
D) We guess this treatment could work better.
Answer: C – Removes first-person (“we”), uses “hypothesize,” and
replaces “might work better” with “may be more effective.”
Question 9
Which of the following is the most
formal version of this sentence?
“The nurse checked out the patient’s wound.”
A) The nurse looked at the
patient’s wound.
B) The nurse examined the patient’s wound.
C) The nurse took a peek at the patient’s wound.
D) The nurse inspected the patient’s wound.
Answer: B or D – Both “examined” and “inspected” are formal.
“Checked out” is an informal phrasal verb. Option C (“took a peek”) is also
informal.
Question 10
A physician writes in a discharge
summary:
“The patient is doing great and can go home.”
Which revision is most appropriate
for medical documentation?
A) The patient is doing great and
can be discharged.
B) The patient is awesome and ready for discharge.
C) The patient is stable and approved for discharge.
D) The patient is super and going home.
Answer: C – “Stable” is precise medical terminology. “Doing great”
is informal.
Bonus: Mixed Practice
(5 Questions)
Question 11
Which sentence is
appropriate for a formal lab report?
A) We got weird
results that didn't match our guess.
B) The data were inconsistent with the predicted outcomes.
C) The experiment kinda failed, so we re-did it.
D) Something was totally off with the measurements.
Answer:
B
Question 12
A nurse tells a
colleague: “Room 212 is super stable right now.” In a formal chart note, this
should be written as:
A) Room 212 is
super stable.
B) Room 212 is totally stable.
C) Room 212 is very stable.
D) Room 212 is stable.
Answer:
D – “Stable” alone is sufficient. “Super” and “very” are unnecessary and
informal.
Question 13
Which of the
following is not a feature of formal language?
A) Third-person
pronouns (he, she, it, they)
B) Complete sentences
C) Slang and contractions
D) Precise vocabulary
Answer:
C
Question 14
Revise for a
professional email: “Thanks for getting back to me about the schedule.”
A) Thanks for the
schedule info.
B) Thank you for your prompt response regarding the schedule.
C) Appreciate you getting back to me on the schedule.
D) Thanks for responding about the schedule.
Answer:
B
Question 15
Which sentence
uses informal language in a way that would be unacceptable in a nursing care
plan?
A) The patient
ambulated 50 feet with a walker.
B) The patient's pain was 4/10 at rest.
C) The patient was super tired after physical therapy.
D) The patient tolerated breakfast without nausea.
Answer:
C – “Super tired” is informal. Use “fatigued” or “reported significant
fatigue.”
ATI TEAS
7 Practice Test: Knowledge of Language
(25
questions – mixed topics)
Questions 1–5: Slang
Question 1
A nursing student
writes in a reflection: “The patient was super chill during the blood draw.”
Which revision is
most appropriate for a professional clinical note?
A) The patient
was super calm during the blood draw.
B) The patient was chill during the blood draw.
C) The patient remained calm during the blood draw.
D) The patient was totally relaxed during the blood draw.
Answer:
C – “Super chill” is slang. “Remained calm” is professional and neutral.
Question 2
Which sentence
contains slang inappropriate for a formal research paper?
A) The results
were inconsistent with the hypothesis.
B) The control group showed no significant change.
C) The experimental data was total garbage.
D) Data were collected over a six-month period.
Answer:
C – “Total garbage” is slang meaning “worthless” or “invalid.”
Question 3
Read the sentence
from a patient education handout:
“If you start feeling weird, call your doctor.”
Which best
replaces the slang while maintaining clarity?
A) feeling
anxious
B) feeling unusual symptoms
C) feeling happy
D) feeling tired
Answer:
B – “Feeling weird” is vague slang. “Feeling unusual symptoms” is clear and
appropriate.
Question 4
A nurse says in a
handoff: “The patient in 302 crashed at 0200 but is stable now.”
In this context,
“crashed” is:
A) Slang —
inappropriate for medical communication
B) Standard medical terminology meaning sudden deterioration
C) Redundant phrasing
D) A transition word
Answer:
B – In medical settings, “crashed” is accepted shorthand for sudden
deterioration or arrest.
Question 5
Which of the
following is slang?
A) Cannot
B) Going to
C) Gonna
D) Will not
Answer:
C – “Gonna” is slang for “going to.”
Questions 6–10: Formal
vs. Informal Language
Question 6
Which sentence is
appropriate for a formal business memo?
A) We need to get
this done ASAP.
B) Please complete this task by Friday, March 10th.
C) Hey team, let’s knock this out quick.
D) This thing is due Friday, so don’t forget.
Answer:
B – This is professional and clear. The others use informal language (“ASAP,”
“hey,” “knock this out,” “don’t forget”).
Question 7
Revise the
following for a nursing care plan:
“The patient didn't want to take her meds.”
A) The patient
refused to take her medications.
B) The patient didn't want to take her medications at all.
C) The patient was like, no way, to her meds.
D) The patient kinda didn't want her meds.
Answer:
A – “Refused” is precise and professional, and the contraction “didn’t” is
removed.
Question 8
Which sentence
uses formal language?
A) The results
were pretty surprising.
B) A lot of patients missed their appointments.
C) Numerous patients failed to attend scheduled appointments.
D) The data seems kinda off to me.
Answer:
C – “Numerous” and “failed to attend scheduled appointments” are formal. The
others use informal words (“pretty,” “a lot of,” “kinda”).
Question 9
A student writes
in an academic essay: “I think that social media has a bunch of negative
effects.”
Which revision is
most formal?
A) I believe
social media has many negative effects.
B) Social media has lots of negative effects.
C) Research suggests that social media has numerous negative effects.
D) Social media, like, has a ton of bad effects.
Answer:
C – Removes first-person (“I think”), uses “research suggests,” and replaces “a
bunch of” with “numerous.”
Question 10
Which of the
following is a feature of informal language?
A) Third-person
pronouns
B) Contractions (e.g., don’t, can’t)
C) Precise vocabulary
D) Complete sentences
Answer:
B – Contractions are a hallmark of informal language.
Questions 11–13:
Redundancy
Question 11
The nurse asked
the patient to repeat again the instructions.
Which corrects
the redundancy?
A) repeat again
once more
B) repeat
C) repeat a second time
D) again repeat
Answer:
B – “Repeat” already means to say again.
Question 12
Which sentence
contains a redundancy?
A) The two twins
looked identical.
B) The patient was discharged home.
C) The lab results were abnormal.
D) The doctor wrote a prescription.
Answer:
A – “Twins” are two people by definition, so “two” is redundant.
Question 13
The final
conclusion of the study was published in a medical journal.
Which word is
redundant?
A) final
B) conclusion
C) published
D) medical
Answer:
A – A conclusion is inherently final.
Questions 14–16: Tone
Question 14
Which sentence is
most appropriate for a formal research proposal?
A) This whole
experiment thing is kinda cool.
B) We think our idea is probably right.
C) The proposed study will examine the correlation between sleep and cognition.
D) Honestly, nobody has really looked into this before, which is wild.
Answer:
C – Formal, objective, and precise.
Question 15
Read the sentence
from a patient handout:
“If you forget your meds, don’t freak out — just take them when you remember.”
Which revision
maintains clarity with a more professional tone?
A) If you forget
your meds, don’t panic — just take them when you remember.
B) If you miss a dose, do not panic — take it as soon as you remember.
C) If you forget, chill out and take it later.
D) Forgetting meds is bad. Take them.
Answer:
B – Removes contraction (“don’t” → “do not”), replaces slang (“freak out” →
“panic”), and uses precise language (“miss a dose”).
Question 16
Which sentence
has an inappropriately casual tone for a nursing report?
A) The patient
ambulated to the bathroom with assistance.
B) The patient denied chest pain overnight.
C) The patient was super tired after therapy.
D) The patient’s vitals were stable at 0600.
Answer:
C – “Super tired” is too casual. Use “fatigued” or “reported exhaustion.”
Questions 17–19:
Transition Words
Question 17
The patient took
the medication as prescribed; ______, her symptoms improved within 24 hours.
A) however
B) consequently
C) for example
D) otherwise
Answer:
B – “Consequently” shows cause and effect.
Question 18
The first
treatment was ineffective; ______, the physician ordered a different approach.
A) therefore
B) in contrast
C) similarly
D) for instance
Answer:
A – “Therefore” indicates a logical result.
Question 19
The patient’s
blood pressure decreased; ______, her heart rate remained elevated.
A) in addition
B) for example
C) however
D) consequently
Answer:
C – “However” contrasts the decreased BP with the elevated heart rate.
Questions 20–22: Topic
Sentences
Question 20
Which sentence
would be the best topic sentence for a paragraph about the benefits of
handwashing?
A) Soap was first
used for cleaning skin around 2800 BCE.
B) Handwashing with soap removes bacteria and viruses effectively.
C) Many hospitals have hand hygiene stations at every entrance.
D) Some people forget to wash their hands before eating.
Answer:
B – This introduces the main idea (benefits of handwashing).
Question 21
Read the
paragraph below:
(1) Regular
exercise strengthens the heart.
(2) It also helps control blood sugar.
(3) Weight-bearing exercises improve bone density.
(4) Many people prefer evening workouts.
Which sentence is
out of place?
A) Sentence 1
B) Sentence 2
C) Sentence 3
D) Sentence 4
Answer:
D – Sentence 4 is unrelated to physiological benefits.
Question 22
“Vaccination
remains one of the most effective public health interventions in modern
medicine.”
This sentence
serves as a:
A) Supporting
detail
B) Topic sentence
C) Transition sentence
D) Conclusion
Answer:
B – It introduces the main idea of the paragraph.
Questions 23–25:
Thesis Statements
Question 23
Which of the
following is a strong thesis statement?
A) This paper
will discuss the pros and cons of mandatory vaccination.
B) Mandatory vaccination policies protect public health, prevent outbreaks, and
save lives.
C) Vaccines are shots that prevent diseases.
D) There are many things to consider about vaccination.
Answer:
B – Clear, arguable claim with supporting points.
Question 24
Which sentence is
too vague to serve as an effective thesis statement?
A) Requiring
helmets for cyclists reduces head injuries and saves healthcare costs.
B) Social media has changed communication in several ways.
C) The Affordable Care Act increased insurance coverage between 2014 and 2016.
D) Free community college would increase access while reducing student debt.
Answer:
B – “Several ways” is vague.
Question 25
A student writes:
“In this essay, I will explain why exercise is important.”
Which revision is
an effective thesis statement?
A) Exercise is
important for many reasons.
B) Have you ever thought about why exercise matters?
C) Regular exercise improves cardiovascular health, reduces stress, and
supports weight management.
D) Exercise is when you move your body to get fit.
Answer:
C – Replaces announcement with a specific, arguable claim.
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