IELTS
Academic Writing Task 1: Line Graphs
Useful
Tips
1.
Analyze
the graph carefully: Identify trends, changes,
highest/lowest points, etc.
2.
Understand
the time period: Use correct tenses (usually past
simple).
3.
Group
similar data: Don’t describe every point
individually.
4.
Use a variety
of vocabulary: Avoid repetition.
5.
Avoid
opinions: Just describe the data.
6.
Write at
least 150 words, but not too long (170–190 is
ideal).
7.
Paraphrase
the question in the introduction.
Linking
Words & Phrases
➤ Introduction
& Overview
- The line graph illustrates...
- The graph compares...
- Overall,...
- In general,...
- It can be seen that...
➤
Describing Trends
- increased / rose / climbed / grew
- decreased / declined / dropped / fell
- remained steady / stable
- fluctuated
- peaked / reached a peak
- hit a low / bottomed out
➤ Time
Connectors
- In 2000 / Between 1990 and 2000
- Over the next ten years
- During the period shown
- By 2010 / From 2000 onwards
➤
Comparative Phrases
- was higher than / lower than
- overtook / surpassed
- similar to / the same as
- in contrast / whereas / while / however
Structure
1.
Introduction (1-2 sentences)
- Paraphrase the task question.
2.
Overview (2 sentences)
- Summarize main trends (not specific data).
3.
Body Paragraph 1
- Describe key features or trends (with data).
4.
Body Paragraph 2
- Compare, contrast, or describe changes (with data).
Sample
Line Graph Question
Question:
The graph below shows the number of international tourists who visited three
different regions from 2000 to 2020.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and
make comparisons where relevant.
The line graph illustrates the number of international tourists
(in millions) who visited France, the USA, and Japan between 2000 and 2020.
Overall,
France consistently remained the most visited country throughout the period,
despite some fluctuations. The USA, on the other hand, experienced a steady
decline in tourist arrivals, while Japan showed remarkable growth, surpassing
the USA by the end of the period.
In
2000, France welcomed the highest number of international visitors at 75
million, followed by the USA with 60 million and Japan with just 15 million.
Over the following decade, France’s figures fluctuated, reaching a peak of 90
million in 2010 before experiencing a slight fall. The USA, however, recorded a
gradual decline, with arrivals falling to 50 million by 2010. Meanwhile,
Japan’s tourism industry showed modest growth, doubling to 30 million during
the same period.
From
2010 onwards, France’s tourist numbers remained relatively stable, finishing at
85 million in 2020. In contrast, the USA continued to lose visitors, with
figures dropping sharply to 40 million by 2020. Japan, however, experienced a
dramatic upturn, with international arrivals soaring to 55 million, overtaking
the USA for the first time.
In
summary, France maintained its position as the leading tourist destination,
Japan achieved the most rapid and significant growth, and the USA faced a
consistent downward trend over the two decades.
Sample 2
The line graph shows the number of players in four
different sports (badminton, tennis, basketball, rugby) in a particular
European country between 1985 and 2005.
The line graph illustrates the number of players participating in
different types of sports between 1985 and 2005.
Overall,
rugby and tennis were the most popular sports throughout most of the period,
except in 2005 when the number of rugby players declined sharply. By contrast,
basketball and badminton remained relatively stable, showing no significant
changes over the two decades.
In
1985, rugby recorded the highest number of players at about 250, followed by
tennis with approximately 150 participants. Over the years, the number of
tennis players rose considerably, reaching 200 in 1995, where it equaled rugby,
and eventually surpassing it with over 200 players by 2005. Rugby, on the other
hand, experienced a steep decline after 1995, plummeting to just 50 players by
the end of the period.
As
for the other sports, basketball maintained a steady participation rate of
around 70 players, while badminton consistently attracted about 50 players
throughout the 20-year span.
In
summary, while rugby initially dominated, its popularity fell dramatically,
allowing tennis to become the leading sport by 2005. Meanwhile, basketball and
badminton saw little to no change in participation.
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